Hmmm...maybe a bit too much ground in this one? The tree silhouette is beautiful and kind of sad hidden behind that wall. I'd like to see an image that emphasizes it a little more. A lot of your recent work has a similar distance from the subject to you. Maybe mix that up a bit? Just a thought...
Thanks Bill, I agree that this image could be better. It was one of those situations that the light caught my eye and by the time I made a couple images of it the light was gone. This was the middle of 4-5 images, the first had the light all the way down to just the top of the benches, the last had the best composition but no light. Planing to re shoot soon.
I have been starting to vary my distance and lenses more in the past month, but I don's seem to like the images i am getting.
We get together every few months or so and you should definitely join us. I'd like to hear your thoughts on what I'm working on right now. Of course Sarah B is usually there, and she's pretty tough!
I love this light. I'm still trying to figure out the whole distance thing, but thanks for the advice the other day. I really needed to speak to someone who was once where I am now.
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Hmmm...maybe a bit too much ground in this one? The tree silhouette is beautiful and kind of sad hidden behind that wall. I'd like to see an image that emphasizes it a little more. A lot of your recent work has a similar distance from the subject to you. Maybe mix that up a bit? Just a thought...
Thanks Bill,
I agree that this image could be better. It was one of those situations that the light caught my eye and by the time I made a couple images of it the light was gone. This was the middle of 4-5 images, the first had the light all the way down to just the top of the benches, the last had the best composition but no light. Planing to re shoot soon.
I have been starting to vary my distance and lenses more in the past month, but I don's seem to like the images i am getting.
I hear a couple of you guys get together every month or so for a crit. Would it be possible to join you?
We get together every few months or so and you should definitely join us. I'd like to hear your thoughts on what I'm working on right now. Of course Sarah B is usually there, and she's pretty tough!
I love this light. I'm still trying to figure out the whole distance thing, but thanks for the advice the other day. I really needed to speak to someone who was once where I am now.
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